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Comment by: kc0003 - 2008-08-30 11:46
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| this is a very nice piece...soft and meaningful... |
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This is nice. Obviously you like Neruda. You might consider a tiny alteration which will drastically alter the poem but imbue it with the kind of mystery you seek. But I'll send it to you in an e-mail. :-)
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| This is a very good poem with a feel of Pablo Neruda's work. |
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when the sounds of their song became
when the touch of their linen became
as the fragrance of their skin was becoming
so became their longing into being |
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| Awesome, it is amazing how we desire the exotic, how it fires the imagination and triggers our fantasies. Great poem depicting that deep desire that hides within us all :) |
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