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Comment by: Dakota - 2008-01-27 08:20
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A lovely unjaded celebration
Beautiful and up lifting
Posative and refreshing...x |
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Comment by: Frances - 2007-06-14 04:42
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Yes, they are always our `babies` no matter how old they are. A lovely write full of love.
Frances. |
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I see this as a verse to a child (even if the child just turned twenty)
As far as the poem? I am a same number of lines per stanza person. It makes the verses choppy if not metered and syllabicated the same but many people write free verse that isn't metered or the same number of syllables. I has a positive genre; I just think the flow would be smoother if the stanzas were the same and words weren't repeated so much. |
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Comment by: Mrsg - 2007-06-11 08:18
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| I tend to try to look at the positives in life--because we are bombarded by the negatives every day. The media thrives on negative news. Feel free to take my "sweet" writings and add them to your tea for taste. And don't forget to smile as you enjoy the flavor!! Thanks for the thoughts |
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Comment by: zepol - 2007-06-07 22:26
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| This is a very nice poem. It rhymes well but I must agree with Kerosene. Thanks for sharing a good read. |
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