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milner place
Milner Place
United Kingdom, West Yorkshire, Huddersfield

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Kali-eyed among aphids

That morning a lot of fleeting thoughts
fleeted, cascaded from blocked gutters.
Memories flickered through many prisms
in the Kali-eyed scope; sometimes angry

wild wild birds, skulls, seas of black hair
and tawny, bald heads, glossy teeth all
interspersed with wondering, pondering,
inconclusively it may have been said.

Unanswered questions were not a problem,
mastodons, angels, aphids and gherkins were.
A moon grinned, a turtle wept salt tears,
pumas slouched through shadows of ferns.

Fleeting images fleeted on quixotically,
tumbled and cascaded until after afternoon.

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hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2007-04-08 09:28
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Well done Milner. I used to enjoy playing with one of those things too. Have not seen one in years though.
thecandystore Comment by: thecandystore - 2007-04-07 09:10
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well done!
jagainst Comment by: jagainst - 2007-04-07 07:11
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I used to work at a nursery and part of my duties was to spray cancerous chemicals to kill the aphids...i hated it, and never thought I'd think of aphids again. I'm glad I was reminded with a great piece of poetry. You have so many big images in this one, and I love grinning moons, crying turtles, and always mastadons. Oh yeah, had to look up quixotically...not gonna lie. Awesome piece.
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