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Comment by: Min - 2007-04-10 08:39
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| Lovely words, Sheri. As if anyone could stop you writing if you wanted to. So pleased it's no longer in BLOCK CAPITALS. Your words speak for themselves.....loudly. |
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Comment by: dreamer - 2007-04-09 16:07
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| What irony! I had to read your poem more than once, just to completely wrap my mind around it. Forceful in a so few words. The last line "How I laugh" repeated is a real topper. I can feel the intensity. |
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Comment by: - 2007-04-08 22:08
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| hmm...its like you tellin everybody they can try to be you but they're never going to be at your level..foolish pride, i likes that |
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Comment by: roy - 2007-04-08 22:01
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hmmm...Cheri darling, this is an "ouch" very sarcastic, full of irony and a lot of "fuck yous". The words of cool, i also like the ending, but hell it did not really end...so i feel no closure in this poem.
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Comment by: manoj - 2007-04-08 21:20
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| The sarcasm is superb... enjoyed. |
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