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Something's changed
Something
Which has made me switch
From not noticing you
To not being able
To get you out of my head
And whilst
I am unable to figure out
If it is down
To you or to me
I do know right now
There is nothing I want
Quite as passionately
As I want you
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This is pretty neat, Michelle. I love the repetition of 'Something' at the start, and it (to me) just works as is. Couldn't see anything that struck me as incongruous. Love the final three lines, a real sense of longing and urgency.
