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kristiexx
kristie drew
United Kingdom, shropshire

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The night

The sky turns the colour of you,
I am alone but never lonely,
Its our time,
I lie in my bed and think,
My thoughts can never betray me,
My mind does not lie,
I protest in daylight i do not love you,
But despite everything past here lies the truth,
In the grey night i only think of you,
I know you are thinking of me
I know it cause i can feel it,
With a strength and depth unsurpassed,
Your feelings flood from the night,
We share a true conection,
A bond that can never be broken,
Your body may never be mine,
But your mind always will,

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Goatboy1974 Comment by: Goatboy1974 - 2007-05-31 00:47
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Anyone who's ever had a connection with anyone who is already in a relationship will understand this poem . . . all toooo well. Good stuff. Spelling? Well it's important to a certain limited point but spelling has nothing to do with creativity (and it best not do because that last word just looks plain wrong).
kristiexx Comment by: kristiexx - 2007-05-16 01:11
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I know i cant spell, i think ive mentioned, meantened, meontioned it! & thats after spell check
sudipal Comment by: sudipal - 2007-05-06 07:31
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I really like the last two lines. Very sad and pretty as a whole.

Few spelling errors, though.
callmekate Comment by: callmekate - 2007-04-12 00:35
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I love this, I can relate to it a hella lot. :]
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