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BumpSkillz
Robert R. Vincench
United States, New York, Long Island

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Late-Night Fantasy

Your hair is silk,
Your eyes are gems,
Your skin is Heaven's touch;
Your lips a gate,
Your breasts fresh-baked,
Who would expect this much?

Your tongue a snake,
So wet and warm,
And skilled at lifting hairs;
Your legs are mine,
As such behind,
I really should beware.

It feels so right,
This wicked night,
You're perfect and you're nude;
I need some more,
I see your door,
My man will make his move.

But in this place,
Your pretty face,
It's bliss but not quite true;
You're fantasy,
You're just a dream,
And I'm not in love with you.

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Katydidnt Comment by: Katydidnt - 2007-05-25 20:30
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Such a glimpse into the naughty minds of men : ) Not that I'm so innocent myself... nice fun read!
Scribe Comment by: Scribe - 2007-04-15 10:00
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Terrific pace. Nicely done. Alluring subject matter. I've experimented with it myself.
milner place Comment by: milner place - 2007-04-12 01:53
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Fun, and well-imaged.

Milner
Joni Ramos Comment by: Joni Ramos - 2007-04-11 15:15
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interesting lines, pretty unique....

breasts fresh baked? mmmm never heard it put that way but it made me think twice..

okay what about the tongue..
a snake
so wet and warm

very interesting....glad she's just a fantasy.

1st and 3rd stanzas were great. Thanks for the read
thecandystore Comment by: thecandystore - 2007-04-11 12:59
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yes, i have to agree. very well done. good description and imagery. i have nothing to criticise. thanks for a good read. nice!

C
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