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DrCarter2001
Joel Shulkin
United States

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In My Heart

Before I met you, I never knew
 what I was living without.
Such an endeavor, to share life together
 made me shake my head in doubt.
But as you hold my hand, I understand
 what all the fuss is about.

I'll hold you forever in my heart.
Without you my life could never start.
No matter where you may go,
there's one thing I know -
We'll never be apart
`Cuz I'll hold you in my heart.

As I stand here, it might appear
my courage has all run dry.
With hopes of sharing a life as man and wife
 and succeeding on the first try,
When I look in your eyes, I can't disguise
that I'll love you `til the day I die.

I'll hold you forever in my heart.
Without you my life could never start.
No matter where you may go,
there's one thing I know -
We'll never be apart
`Cuz I'll hold you in my heart.

At times our bodies will be miles apart,
but our souls will always be one.
And though this day is nearly over,
our journey has only begun.

I'll hold you forever in my heart.
Without you my life could never start.
No matter where you may go,
there's one thing I know -
We'll never be apart
`Cuz I'll hold you in my heart.

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bebelestrange Comment by: bebelestrange - 2008-05-24 14:46
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It's quite lovely, I'm sure you'll have no trouble, as I'm betting your fiancee will be overjoyed that you are thoughtful enough to write a song for
her.
jennhall Comment by: jennhall - 2008-05-14 00:09
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This was a beautiful song/poem. I'm a hopeless romantic. I hope she says yes. Good luck.
DrCarter2001 Comment by: DrCarter2001 - 2008-05-09 20:19
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Took care of the editing problem. Yes, Janet, it actually is a song I wrote for my fiancee. Problem is my singing voice is mediocre at best, so I wanted to see what people think of the lyrics before I exert too much more effort on cleaning up the melody. Or I might enter it in a song lyric contest if people really like it.
ParchmentPoetry Comment by: ParchmentPoetry - 2007-04-20 19:25
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Sounds like song lyrics. Very nicely done. You're an incurable romantic. I hope this lady, whoever she is, gets a copy of it in some form. I did notice some typos, but I'm sure it's from the upload. It seems to be the quotes and maybe it's the font difference from what your originally wrote the poem in. Janet
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