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genesis
he came from the penny arcade
a flash of text
and cryptic wit;
glorifications of
my innocence
illuminated like
orange marmalade,
hitting so hard
he struck oil.
now look at the mess
we've made.
my hands are soiled
from cherry lozenges
and bloodstains;
but he tasted like
holy water,
i prayed after
each drop.
thanked god
for drowning into
this poison man
with diamonds in his mouth.
they said he'd leave me empty,
just like the grave
i dug myself.
he did his best to hide the shovels,
painted all the sweet
and sour,
and never ever led me on.
against the crowd
i walked into my heartache
knowingly,
proudly,
with absolutely
no
regret;
this screaming
hollow spot
inside my chest
my only debt.
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| Your descriptions and style are refreshing. A lot of poets on this site have the same old style and use the same old tired metaphors...not the case with you. I really enjoyed this poem. Thanks for that. |
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| Very good poem, and a lot of emotion shines through too. |
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Comment by: badwolf - 2007-06-29 17:36
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| this is a nice description of the whole "it is what it is" thing. |
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This was a really good poem. Powefull and cryptically leveled. My favorite part was but
he tasted like
holy water,
i prayed after
each drop.
Very well written. True poetry is presented here. |
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| Wow... "drowning in this poison man" ... a baptism into something new and in hindsight unholy. Innocent is right... each line is a solid block, and I love that... |
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