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PANDORA
PAN DORA
United States, I AM, IN THE NEXT ROOM

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Eternal Love

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She sits alone
at a table set for two
covered in white linen cobwebs
Dusty silverware
plates
wine glasses
where all remains still
waiting for her lover

She sits straight in her chair
elbows at her side
napkin on her lap
ready for his kiss

At a glance you see
hair cascading
make-up flawless
body exquisite

Draw closer
you realize
her hair is
old
brittle
make-up runs
down her face
along side tears
her frail body
undernourished

She has come to this table
where one chairs always remains empty
in this forgotten room
where hope began and died
waiting for her lover...

For all Eternity

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kidquando Comment by: kidquando - 2008-05-19 20:46
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Damn. This is like the scene from the sixth sense. Very vivd and quite heart breaking. This poem is quite comparable to "I do not know love".
RJA
helao Comment by: helao - 2008-03-03 19:18
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This piece's elegance underscores the haunting sentiment. I like the imagery very much.
skypoetone Comment by: skypoetone Online- 2007-04-26 18:10
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I do love your mellow moods. I'm not one for profanities, just an old soft romantic. This is an exquisite portrait, one that would look good on anyone's wall.
Beautiful work.
~Tony
awesome Comment by: awesome - 2007-04-20 12:03
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Wow. That is really amazing. Only thing is you wrote "where one chairs always remains empty" It should be "where one chair always remains empty." But very beautifully written.
spDulong Comment by: spDulong - 2007-04-20 09:36
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undernourished. in love and life? great word choice and imagery, it's as if you realize her soul is described as you " draw closer"
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