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These are the nights
My Christmas party, she came in
Still in the flakes of winter air
I did my best to ruffle the cold out of her hair
Then took her coat. The mistletoe
Seemed mad for one so shy
Guests gone, my head soon noosed around her throat
Then we were one. Then we were not
My hands settled on the little pots
Of warmth, the tiny, twin pillows on her chest
I smiled as the misty moon rose
How she clung to my scant nipple-down
How she tried to keep warm
I felt almost a paedo as night came to its close
Funny, I used to think that everyone
Could feel this good, at least twice
Then she was gone
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| I like that, a good way of relaying how fleeting moments can be, and how magnifiscent the memory of it we retain :) |
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Comment by: nesca - 2007-04-16 23:52
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very very good renee, i like the rhythim to this piece, the feel and flow of it all, cool stuff, i dig it...
ciao,
tony |
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