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lookinghomeward
Abner Thorne
United States, CA, Carlsbad

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Sonnet

With smile so sulf'rous, so bright,
One needs not stars, nor sun, nor candle to
Light the sky: dark, dreary, dampened, ashened;
One glance quickened, made with haste, only that
Is necessary to enliven thick,
Humid air; each glance, each trumpet sounding.
Golden instruments shining could use not
Enough blasphemous air to fill th'earth with
A noise so fair: each ivory instrument
'Neath rose-red lips satiates my hungry
Gaze; within moments gone: Ah! My heart has
Been lost; fate determined; soul stole like Faust.

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jenstarese Comment by: jenstarese - 2007-06-06 21:29
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My goodness...It's been quite some time since I've seen writing as timeless as this
good job I look forward to reading more. You have snared me and reeled me in
Jen*
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