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jwilli4
Judy Williams
United States, New York, Freeport

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Listen,

by the count of three
if you don't---
No.
I won't---
No.
I can't
count on you
anymore.

Every count reopens
a wound:
Thoughtless,
Selfish,
Malicious...

To bear with you
is suicide.


© Judy MiCha Copyright 2007

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allysonmh Comment by: allysonmh - 2007-05-12 12:02
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i love the poem, it reminded me right away of my boyfriend.. a suicide you cant help but commit..
Wisdomdoc Comment by: Wisdomdoc - 2007-05-05 14:16
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There is a saying less is more and this poem is more in its simple stucture. I love it and it needs to be said more often
Kuntster Comment by: Kuntster - 2007-05-04 17:00
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I like.
Industrialwaves Comment by: Industrialwaves - 2007-05-02 02:21
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this is the kind of poetry I love to read. simple an abit in your face.. thanks
DriftwoodWriter Comment by: DriftwoodWriter - 2007-04-24 05:21
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Jesus Christ. Impact @ ground Zero. I feel bad for the man/woman this was written for.
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