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ineffability
brittle bee
United States, Indiana, fer now

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Due to Sugary,Savage Plums

Parted lips lock parting love letters;
those not yet exchanged before us each talk teethedandliplocked;
say what ye did not;
"Only your penmanship, Juliet, hath effloresced."

Embitter sigh, gliding, reasoned in recess
ed chrysalis
another lisp whilst the double sided tongue risks
honey leaden promises
strung and stringed dripping one by one
along thee longest song callused,tiptoeing fingers have stalled
due to all
these savage sugar plums
meticulously emphatic
ridiculously fanfuckingtastic
tho' ruthlessly stupid for this stagnant bliss
having overcome accessible ignorance
for playing Monkey as much as supposed Bear
,
Here
,
I am still there:
the now of naught and whereas of yet this train
embarked its parked,intermittent
artist all wet

Wetly,
I'm finally unwritten. I finally am riding,

grinding the orchestral breaks with a prithee
Pray, thee, darling! Do NOT pray for me
with an analgesic eye like THAT
for on out the other's, -that nibbling cripple kneeled me
Will kneel reeling smoke in mingled stacks
of nubbing neutrality gumming
nawing
swallowing back

at the only systolic second it took
to impact
mine unrival's unrival
smiling
in kicked back,hypothetical disheartened attacks

May that thee ode we lack
forget its English also,
so stay the water coloring blueless alliteration

Sear instilled scarlets
'lo 'twixt unbefit confligarations
shamelessly burning for what is to be





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unto


dyslexia

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TequilaTwilight Comment by: TequilaTwilight - 2007-05-30 03:17
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Your language (and use of it) is sumptuous! i cannot get enough of your writing! The poem works well throughout and actually leaves me hungry for more at the same time as stuffed with satisfaction! You certainly have brought fantastic poetry to this site! i really like the mixture of old style and new style language (you mix them well).

Like the other poem i have commented on i believe i will keep coming back to this and appreciating it more and more.

Pat on the back to you!
Comment by: - 2007-05-18 11:56
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Hopkins meets Dodgson in the afterlife. Brewing ablutionary liquor. Honeywine for nacreous nights of solitude.
ineffability Comment by: ineffability - 2007-04-23 13:45
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Ja, Solaris! You most certainly give some inseparable words to ineffabilities. Breathe depths deeply, seamstress. "Savage sugar plums" was rather reimbursing I must say ;)

Kenneth: I enjoy editing, adding on, taking out...thoroughly. The time to sit and think and try and get it exactly right, without paying mind to rhyming schemes and grammar, -although each has their own place, is what I love most about writing: dedicatingly balancing!

Dear Johnny: ____ ________ __ ______ ___.
JohnnySodoff Comment by: JohnnySodoff - 2007-04-23 13:02
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I bet you whoever this poem is about likes it a lot.
solaris Comment by: solaris - 2007-04-20 14:00
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these savage sugar plums.

man, wish i'd written that. umhummmmmmmmm
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