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leoline28
Lisa Herrman
United States, OR, Springfield

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City smells

"On our way! We're goin'!!"
I feel like jumping out of my skin trying to get closer, quicker. Excitement fills my face and the bloodflow enhances my sense of smell. Dear God, someone just cut the grass on the U of O campus, and the mingle of the green with the gasoline of the mower lifts my spirits that much higher. Eugene has the unique weather pattern of "if you don't like the weather, just wait a minute, it'll change". Now it settles the floating grass chaff with a sprinkle or two, moistening the earth, the oily street and my jacket leather, bringing organic melange futher into my olfactory buffet.
"Sting! Dude, I can't believe we got the tickets!"
I laugh. Sting at MacArthur court couldn't be better. We step out, ignoring the slow moving cyclists and cars on campus, edging closer, hoping that the faster we're in, the faster it'll start. Small pockets of smokers congregate, and those varied odors, no all unpleasant, asail. Clove cigs, joints, (this is Eugene, of course), an occasional pipe and cigar seem less offensive tonight. The sweetest part of our lives together, music, is in the offing, and the crowded odors, these city smells in their pungence, could not possibly more welcome.

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PhoenixTPA Comment by: PhoenixTPA - 2007-05-31 19:05
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You have assembled some AWESOME descriptions of the various smells around the campus, which made me feel as if I was an observer in this setting. Thank you for the great piece.
anastar Comment by: anastar - 2007-05-11 01:10
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Oh that was nice! It reminds me of the earthy smell of my plants when i water them...or the smell of water in the air when a storm is coming...this was an awesome flash fiction that titilate the senses!

Good luck with the contest!
theother Comment by: theother - 2007-04-29 15:03
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the oily street and my jacket leather, bringing organic melange futher into my olfactory buffet.

Are you kidding? This is a genius line...Love this piece, all the senses are here, wildly so, thanks for sharing!

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leoline28 Comment by: leoline28 - 2007-04-26 15:49
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This was my version of a quickie:)
roy Comment by: roy - 2007-04-26 08:19
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some news mells there, so lost in the others...I liked the speed of your story, high energy and great story.
Thanks for the read,
Roy
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