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chibearsfan2006
Christopher Pike
United States, Virginia, Williamsburg

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You've Ruined Me

You've lied, cheated and played me for a fool,
Took every piece of me and ripped it apart,
I have no more to give, get out of my heart.
I hate you for what you've done,
I thought you were the only one.
Stop your lies; I'm not hearing this anymore,
Fuck you; it can never be as it was before.
You say you love me, you say you want it to be,
But I don't love you; you've ruined me.
All I have is a hole where my heart used to be,
I loved you; how could you do this to me?
Don't say another word,
I already don't believe you,
Get out; I don't give a fuck what you do.
I hate you; I feel so used,
Beaten; exhausted; abused.
All those nights you made those lies,
I am broken; my soul cries.
Turn away and never come back,
Took everything I had, but my integrity is still intact.
I hate you; I feel so shattered,
Empty; alone; battered.
Took every piece of me and ripped it apart,
I have no more to give, get out of my heart.
You say you love me, you say you want it to be,
Fuck you, I hate you, you've ruined me.

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redtwinsis Comment by: redtwinsis - 2008-01-15 08:55
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I can relate to this piece...I feel can feel the hatred in each word you wrote...Very well Written:)
mejaflora Comment by: mejaflora - 2007-04-30 02:43
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Very raw and I can feel the anger in this poem. I can imagine writing this strongly with a pen almost breaking the paper.
truefarmersheart Comment by: truefarmersheart - 2007-04-29 00:25
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The passion in this poem was true right down to the heart but what makes it light up and dig itself in one's mind is the anger. The anger shown in this poem is the key to its brilliance. You didnt hold back and that is something that creates real talent. You should be proud of this poem...
history Comment by: history - 2007-04-18 14:47
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Wow. I love this, very powerful. I know exactly where you're coming from and the hate that can spill forth. I like the rhyming scheme and I love the line:

I am broken; my soul cries.

Good stuff :)
mscharlee Comment by: mscharlee - 2007-04-18 09:25
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Definitely have been there.
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