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MissLogical
Leah Gelseth
United States, WA, Edmonds

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The dark paths to where his eyes lead are brightened by a golden flicker of lights that warmly cradel the festering blackness that is its center. I can see the dark tinted shadows that lie hidden behind his smoothly handsome mask. Let me kiss away the hardness that lie behind that light hearted smile. To relish in the smoldering darkness that bubbles over as passions climb. To let me lay away the unrest that haunts those dimly lit hallways that reside of your eyes.

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Robert Barlow Comment by: Robert Barlow - 2007-04-23 19:16
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Leah, I can see that description is one of your strong points. I agree that this would make a good opening. --Robert Barlow
gunnar Comment by: gunnar - 2007-04-19 04:38
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"The Mask" as a title? Or perhaps simply, "Mask"? Nonetheless, it's a good start to the introduction of a character.
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