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fairygothqueen
Ana Castro
United States

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Rena

She woke up tired and cold, naked covered in dirt. She touched her freezing skin she had to remember how she got here in the middle of this dark cold forest. She had to find somewhere to hide from the cold. She got up her feet were unstable and she soon found herself tumbling back to the ground she felt wet. She looked down at her thighs and noticed a clear hot liquid running down her legs. ?Fuck!? she thought. What the hell had happened to her she couldn?t remember. Here she was wandering naked alone in a forest
Rena shook her head and tried to remember what happened yesterday. She shivered and covered her breasts to her relief she found a cave and quickly scrambled in hoping to God that bears didn?t live in there. The cave however wasn?t as warm as she had hoped and at that moment she wished that she hadn?t quit girl scouts. Well what now? She thought, she didn?t have a cell phone, or clothes, and she couldn?t really call a cab in her state.
She began rubbing herself to try and stay warm; to no avail she sighed and hated the fact she was helpless. She brought her hand to her neck and was shocked to feel bruises on her neck, like bite marks. Oh no something bit me! Great not only will I die from pneumonia but I?ll probably get rabies too. She thought her stomach began to grumble she needed food. As if someone answered a rabbit stumbled into the cave,
Without thinking she grabbed it and sank her teeth into its neck. To her shock and horror she was drinking its blood. She wanted to stop but she couldn?t her hunger was too great to overwhelming. When she finished sucking every last drop she dropped the rabbit in disgust. She couldn?t believe what she had just done. She was scared now more scared than she had ever been in her entire life. What she had done wasn?t natural.
She reasoned with herself she was just starving, and there wasn?t a fire to cook meat. Yeah she was just really hungry yeah that was it. No fire no cooking met she had to whatever it took to survive. She sat naked alone in that cave listening to the howling wind. She tried not to fall asleep scared that she wouldn?t wake up the next morning. Just as she felt the slow tug of sleep she saw a dark figure coming toward her.
She thought she was just dreaming but he was soon standing over her looking deep into her eyes as she lulled to sleep.

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teengonebad Comment by: teengonebad - 2007-04-25 12:22
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Reminds me a bit about Hatchet (if you ever read that book). Survival doesn't always have very pleasant requirements. But when you gotta do something, do it.

Nice write!
kylerayneroa Comment by: kylerayneroa - 2007-04-24 17:09
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Hey this is eche, I like it! but ... if you're a goth why do you always wear color.
LTo Comment by: LTo - 2007-04-19 14:26
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really interesting.. had my attention anyway!
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