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Calisticsunrise
Paige Anderson
United States, michigan, fenton

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Sunrise

The burning sun overpowers
And the clear night moon
Loses its icy touch
Swelters in the sun's presents
Waves of heat flood the moons craters
Intertwining the two
Into the Dance of the sunrise

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Garret Schuelke Comment by: Garret Schuelke - 2007-04-20 22:48
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Sound very much like something Keats would have wrote.

Excellent.
caseysmom Comment by: caseysmom - 2007-04-20 09:20
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i love this poem... short, sweet, and to the point. great description.
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