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To Delight
Sun through fingers
drips
Soft known felt beside
known bed, lips
Mild chatter of the sea
O, what it is to be
in a dream
Stranded
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Comment by: - 2007-06-06 09:37
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| short put to the point keep it that way because its amazing! |
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You're both very kind. I had a little idea with this one and I don't think it came off at all. The backwards syntax is fun, though.
Pleasant dreams are nice enough, but they are indeed dreams.
I wanted to indent part of this into the page, anyone know how I can do that? Multiple space bars don't seem to work.
Thanks, you two |
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| Rattles the mind when one starts to read it. Then, it clicks...cool poem and may all your dreams be pleasent. |
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| this poem reminds me of what french sounds like when translated to english... sentences are all backwards.... but honestly, I think it's awesome. It wouldn't be the same if the sentences were different |
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