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Ziphenia
Cherrie Lovejoy
United States, VA, Doswell

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My Wish Tonight

I am wishing to be held by the one I love.
To feel safe and secure in his arms.
To feel love surround us like an aura.
A glow of powerful connection and enduring faithfulness.
Roots of compassion and understanding.
We will lay under the stars on lush soft grass.
Constellations guiding us through the destiny of time.
Ages swirl all around us.
But we are together through the endless night.
Interlocked in an embrace of completeness.
The smell of roses link us to the past.
Setting peace within our hearts.
Oh, to be held in his arms.
Locked within the emotional tide.
We will be together forever.

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Ohpickles757 Comment by: Ohpickles757 - 2007-04-22 00:53
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Very sweet, sentimental love poem. The kind all of us romantics, love. I admit I'm a big sappy romantic and I'll never give up on love....lol.
kiekie84 Comment by: kiekie84 - 2007-04-21 17:32
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yeah me too mine is in the army in iraq so yeah i sooo get the poem .. :P i have a poem for you can you check it out.. plz? ok thanks!! i think you'll love it!
Ziphenia Comment by: Ziphenia - 2007-04-21 17:28
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Wow, than you so much for your compliment. I am in love and I just had to write how wonderful it felt. Thank you so so much.
kiekie84 Comment by: kiekie84 - 2007-04-21 17:24
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omg i loved it!!!! and im very very picky about most poems!!! so yeah nice job!!!!!!!!
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