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kiekie84
debbie bradek
United States, wa, tacoma

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he is..

he is the lover of my soul
the easy for my mind
the magic that fills my imagination and creativity
the strength to my tears
the future of my dreams
the light to my smile
the laughter that takes away my pain
the protector of my heart
the comfort that my body desires
and the everything
that has consumed me
and will continue to consume me
for many years to come
tell death do us part

because we are
and always will be
together as one

as I watch our love
stretching there
past the ocean
full of nothing but
endless sea's
and collaging stars

so I whisper my love
and carry it far
from you to me
because Forever and ever
you will always be
my true love
my one and only

true love

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kiekie84 Comment by: kiekie84 - 2008-08-04 22:21
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you know i wrote this for a guy that broke my heart but i soon later found someone else to turly love me and He fixed my broken heart people ask how i can believe in Him and i say becuase ... He saved me.. He fixed my broken heart.. He loved me like no other man like no one else ever has... dont you understand i love Him becuase He loved me first! so who am i speaking of well His name is Jesus Christ so this poem goes out to You Lord and every tear i shed and every joy i have and every struggle i face and ever moment of happieness that fill's my life i give it all to You every drop every second everything i have my body my soul my past present and my future my mother my freinds myself its all for You Jesus its all for You ITS ALL FOR YOU!!! and i pray that someday everyone will find out His true love His peace His knowledge and most of all His mercy.... and in Jesus name i pray AMEN!
Scribe Comment by: Scribe Online- 2008-08-04 22:04
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Strong. Passionate. Rips along the page. I felt it. Bravo.
SVENSK Comment by: SVENSK - 2007-04-22 03:10
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Absolute awesome, truthful and divine! No wonder the Good Book says that of the three great ABSOLUTE TRUTHS: Faith, Hope and Love, that LOVE IS THE GREATEST OF THEM ALL! STUNNING!!!!!!!!!
Ohpickles757 Comment by: Ohpickles757 - 2007-04-22 00:35
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Very nice. You express what you feel in a way that is very distinctive. I like that.
Beck Comment by: Beck Online- 2007-04-21 18:54
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True love.. gotta love a bit of true love. I really like the "collaging stars" image it gives it almost an explosive feel like stars colliding and forming new things.
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