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zepol
Hector Lopez
United States, Texas, In San Antonio former New Yorker

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I am a Child Again

Christmas day, no
present for you
and I receive the
same. I will not
complain; I know
what we are.
Regardless, you
have made me proud,
and you keep me
safe even on a
freezing winter day.

The hiss coming
from the kitchen
provides a warm
comfort and is faster
than the Christmas
snow. It falls
slowly this year,
straight down, slow
fat crystals, floating
to the pavement below,
and sticking white.

Everything looks clean
and the streets are
deserted. Quiet, not
even a dog barks, even
they appreciate the
silence. And silence
gives way to your
humming, which makes
all living things glow
warm.

This is what I love
most. Snow and a cold
winter day under the
blankets, so warm
against your breast and
you are young, strong,
and beautiful and I am
a child again.

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Dante Comment by: Dante - 2007-12-29 15:41
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I can really appreciate the atmosphere that you have set up, here. Silence, truly is, a great thing and a gift in itself. "And silence gives way to your humming, which makes all living things glow warm" was my favorite line. Thanks for another great read.
sudipal Comment by: sudipal - 2007-05-30 15:35
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beautiful imagery; happy, comforting tone; i like this a lot.
symonnetorpy Comment by: symonnetorpy - 2007-05-02 16:50
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i liked this piece. you have a talent for short prose. simple and pure feeling. it has a lyrical song-like feel to it.
easywriter58 Comment by: easywriter58 Online- 2007-04-22 00:54
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What a lovely romantic way to cover up what is lacking. You painting a beautiful picture of love that has overpowered the need for material items at Christmas is overwhelming. Enjoyed this!
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