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MAGIC Chapter 8
Melissa felt strange in bed that night. Selena had been insistent that their magic had brought her together with Trevor. She had said that they had to keep at it to make the magic stronger.
So they'd had another fire after supper and they'd carefully washed the rock that was supposed to be Trevor. Cleaning each square inch of it with loving hands. Then Selena had drawn a pentagram on Melissa's tummy and Mel drew one on the sculpted surface of the rock that faced the fire. Nobody said it, but Mel thought of this as drawing her magic design on the boy's stomach. It felt a little wrong in a way. But that made it all the more exciting.
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Comment by: DavidHe Online- 2007-11-19 04:44
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| The shortest but the best of all the chapters! A very good description! I like it very much. |
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Comment by: Bernard - 2007-06-16 12:55
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| OOhhh, hidden desires, I like it. Again, nice thing with the rock, I would have never thought of that. |
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*snerk* Surely you've noticed how endlessly looooong mine are. I've actually concidered breaking them up to attract more readers. I decided not to, mostly because I don't want to mess up the comments. Ch.1 was crawling toward 4,000 words. I guess I just wanted to get all of what I had up there, being mindful of the ten post limit for a freebie account here. I gotta get that paid membership. ;)
I love to read, and the computer screen doesn't bother me at all. I read novels on it all the time. So pour it on. |
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Comment by: Gothica - 2007-04-23 11:15
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| Thanks Wendy. I'm still thinking about what foreshadowing I want to add to Chapters one and two. Chapter nine coming up. It's quite a long one, I'm afraid. |
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| Good foreshadowing, it's a nice contrast to the joyful giddiness of Ch.7. |
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