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| This piece directs the reader to their own "La-di-da-di-da... uh oh!" moment and shows your ability to entertain in a very few words. K |
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Boonrassi - I'm sorry to not have gotten back to you. Your review on this is excellent. I appreciate the thoughtfulness of it and will consider your suggestions.
Regards, Matthew |
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| Thanks, Kate for the review. I was going for a gut-buster on this one. I've read it at least a dozen times or so and laugh every time. I love the potency of a very short piece of writing. |
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Thanks Josiah - I appreciate your review. I like things to be to the point without too much "fluff." Unfortunately so far it's really limited my marketability. I'm working on it though.
Thanks again.
Matthew |
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Comment by: josiah - 2007-05-31 12:01
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you do great, short, direct stories.
this was funny |
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