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Dan Sheridan
United Kingdom, Surrey, Guildford

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True to you.

True to you.

We followed each other in life from tame to extreme,
More than a simple friendship, beyond that shared day dream.
Falling in and out of love, our path was true.
You smiled, I laughed, you cried, I cried too.
We held each other, took a breath and embraced.
Remembered our life long love, no other love can replace.

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wolfgrl1423 Comment by: wolfgrl1423 - 2007-04-24 06:29
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I like this poem, short but sweet. My favorite line is:
'Remembered our life long love, no other love can replace."
Good job!
caseysmom Comment by: caseysmom - 2007-04-23 17:06
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I think that this has great potential. I also think that it would be better if you broke it up. I like the story it tells :)
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Eighteenth Century Horror: Twentieth Century Fear

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