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Frances
Frances Lennon
Australia, Victoria, Melbourne

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Hens Egg

The little girl came out of the corner shop. Her clothing was grubby and a couple of sizes too large for her. Her shoes were also too big on her tiny feet. In her hand she held a solitary hen's egg. As she proceeded to cross the road, her `too big shoes` caused her to trip. She tried desperately to regain her balance, not so much to save herself but to save her precious cargo. Alas, all her efforts were in vain and she dropped the egg.

With a stricken look upon her child's face, she tried desperately to scoop up the running mess, as the broken yellow yoke peppered with eggshell, dripped through her fingers. The tears rolled down her thin, undernourished face, she looked up and catching my worried eye, sobbed saying, ` I'll get killed, that's me Da's tea. `

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Frances Comment by: Frances - 2007-07-01 19:52
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Thank you Dante. I was quite young when I witnessed that scene. It has not left me. I still remember every detail, most of all the stricken look on the little girls face.
Dante Comment by: Dante - 2007-07-01 19:28
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Great show of poetic empathy. It's comforting, to see somebody drawing inspiration from the impoverished. So many people just look the other way...
Frances Comment by: Frances - 2007-06-14 03:21
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Thank you for your comments. Yes, it's hard to believe that one egg could be a mans tea. Poverty is a terrible thing, wherever it happens to be.
Frances.
easywriter58 Comment by: easywriter58 - 2007-06-14 03:16
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This little story reminds me of "Angela's Ashes" and the starvation her children went through and died from in Frank McCourt's book. Pretty sad when you think how we don't consider eggs to be that important to us in our lives.
Frances Comment by: Frances - 2007-04-28 17:53
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Thanks for the comments. Yes they sure do stick in the mind. I actually witnessed that scene.
Frances.
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