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Looks like everyone all ready said what I was going to say. It really does make you think. It seems like a lot of people want to follow their desires without a way to survive out in that jungle, without a map or a guide. Then they end up losing the other things they didn't know they desired, the things that matter the most.
I guess that's why you you use "intricate", "astray", and "lost". |
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| Poems such as these always amaze me. You portray such meaning within a very small amount of words, which I consider to be an incredible talent. Thanks for a great read :) |
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| Indeed less is more. Concise, and stunning; it is my aspiration to learn the talent that came to you so naturally. |
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Comment by: PANDORA - 2007-04-25 09:37
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Another stunning piece.
I agree with everyone else about the deepness of such a short poem.
I think there is a lesson here. You can say all you need to say in short form if you find the right words to express yourself.
Excellent write.** |
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| nicely written. i love short, to the point poems that express deeper thoughts. well done. |
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