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hornedtoad
Eric Fitzgerald
United States, Texas, Austin

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Lightening

A silken fabric,
black as my guitar,
brought with it rolling clouds
and rain.

It painted the road
in slicks and smears
and let its lightning play
across the sky
in electric webbing fingers
that stabbed across the night.

Heaven's screw-like spears parted
the soft, bustled clouds
and traveled along their edges, bouncing off
dots of heat and static, dancing
across the sky. They flickered, then
blew their last breath
away.


(c) E. S. Fitzgerald 2004

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ellykoggle Comment by: ellykoggle - 2007-04-24 21:52
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Nothing like a good storm. Great moody descriptive piece. Love the ending -they flickered then blew their last breath away.
doc1366 Comment by: doc1366 - 2007-04-24 20:23
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We do have the best storms here in Texas. I can all but hear it by the third verse. The mention of a black guitar conjures to mind the image of the god of lightning, dresses like Johnny Cash, flicking inspiration in his lofty wake.
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