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Michael987
Michael Wallick
United States, Arizona, Cottonwood

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Fat puppies

Is it so untenable a thought?

Feeding the homeless people for naught.

Trap the strays and vermin in the streets.

Roasting and frying the little treats.

First boil them to loosen the skin.

Then peel it back and place in the fur lining bin.

See then the succulent, tender meat

Then cut off the little feet.

Pickle the feet in gallons of brine

Make them a snack for any time

Then slice the softened meat from the bones.

Into select cuts like Filet Minon

Grind up the guts, Livers and stuff.

And feed them back to the cute little pups.

Make them fat and sloppy and lazy

Easy to catch so they don't drive you crazy.

No need to love those sweet little morsels

Or listen to those soft muffled whines and chortles.

Making puppy omelets with the chicken's albumen

Why should man try to act like a human?

When he slaughters his own kind on battlefields, urban

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roy Comment by: roy - 2007-05-10 02:29
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I liek the word 'untenabel' a lot meaning describing what is impossible, a lead into the hidden meaning fo this poem.
'Why should man try to act like a human?

When he slaughters his own kind on battlefields, urban'

These last two lines, describe exactly the lack of logic in mans issue and prosecution of moral and norm. For we can justify massive slaughte rin 'legitimate wars' and cry foul in the crimes of the hungry and ignored.

This is a good poem, proves that you are a good short distance sprinter and need to work on those marathons.

Thanks for the read.
ROy
easywriter58 Comment by: easywriter58 - 2007-04-25 20:28
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Why puppies? Michael, you have this all figured out from the beginning to end how to prepare, cook and serve but with the ending as it is, shouldn't the ones slaughtering be the ones slaughtered?
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