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awatson
joe bob
United States

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Hey dont be sad because guess what your a special person because you are lucky to have friends someone in the world could use a friend but they cant find one everyone is my friend even if i dont knowthem they are a very special person to me so just sont judge people by how popular or how they look everyone has there own personality give someone else a chance and become a good friend to them so they can have a good friend like you are to me and that will make there life a whole lot better and maybe you might just like the same things and you could share your house with them so they can earn money and become a better person and then they wouldn't feel so down everyone is a person so just cause they dont have money like some of us doesnt mean that they are a bad person so just learn this good lesson from someone who cares about the people out there who dont have as nice things as us you will also learn that people who cant afford to eat everyday can be pretty nice you just have to try to get to know them and they could suprise you they can be just as good workers as evryone else but no one will hire them because of there past which is not right everyone deserves atlest 2 chances to be a better person and and get some friends and some money to live happy even if they barely make ends meet.

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MaRiAh EsTeP Comment by: MaRiAh EsTeP - 2007-05-21 07:31
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that's sweet, aaren. i'm sorry about all the stuff that's been going on with you. let me know if i can do anything to help.
Informal Grae Comment by: Informal Grae - 2007-05-09 08:59
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Is this a "stream of consciousness" write? If it is it's a very busy read - the structure enforces that and allows no breaths to be taken. If spoken in a rush, with little pause, I could just imagine you at a book reading blowing their minds with it. Don't think typos are important here, it's what's happening that counts. Perhaps you can give us some insight into your thought process for this one - cheers, Aaren - Grae
tamira Comment by: tamira - 2007-05-08 13:13
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Wow, that is so sweet Aaren! You really brightened my day! : )
Andwhy111 Comment by: Andwhy111 - 2007-04-25 11:42
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You're heart is in the right place...
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