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When you look into my eyes
What do you see?
Do you see me?
Or do you see what you wanna see?
Do you see the man that I am trying to be?
Or do you see what everyone else seems to see?
Maybe if you took another look
A deeper look
You would see what I'm trying to show
And not see the image of what other people think they know
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O.K., I had to re-write this one. While I don't think it shows the truth that 1st Impression reveals, it read better for me the second and third times. And where is your recent work? Come on, Ken. 2008 is half over; get posting!
