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Frankenstein's Soul
Strange things happen
When neon moons
And fluorescent suns
Shower artificial life
On dust and oil.
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| Whoo, Costa, "neon moons and fluorescent suns" gives us a modern day 'monster' - the 'dust' is only the beings of the past being recycled, and 'oil' is what this world runs on now - Frankenstein created a monster, but the monster of the present day was created, and continues to mutate the planet and its inhabitants, by Man's greed and short-sightedness - what will the future bring? - I think I'll go and comment on your "Pleiades-G Goldfish) poem, I'm unlikely to see a conspiracy theory there, am I? - regards - Grae. |
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Comment by: tcbswan - 2007-05-05 00:12
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wow! and how did i miss this one?
very nice, short, concise, and
really striking--nice job. i always
admire someone with the ability to
say so much in so few words! bravo~ |
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Nice one, Costa. You're like the master of brief poetry. I liked the Neon Moon description.
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Comment by: costa - 2007-04-27 01:43
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ha! of course, even better! thanks, milner.
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Talking of fun, Costa, you might change the spelling of 'soul' to 'sole'.
milner |
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