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| He keeps getting better and better... I really like this piece Costa, it's short but manages to at the same time have a depth to it, something that isn't easy to achieve. |
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Comment by: costa Online- 2007-05-09 04:30
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Thanks for reading, Trace and Mitch.
I'll see what splitting the stanza up 'does' for me :P, thanks for the hint, Mitch.
Costa |
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Comment by: - 2007-05-06 12:42
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Short and witty. A nice write. Perhaps you could seperate your first stanza into two three line stanzas?
Thanks for the read
Mitch : D |
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Comment by: tcbswan Online- 2007-05-01 20:45
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nice--whitty and just enough reality to be more than funny. nice write costa~
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Comment by: costa Online- 2007-05-01 07:09
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Hey, Thanks Juan and Kero (haha - John 'n' John) - glad you liked it. Only chose peanut because that was the first packet of nuts I saw in the shop...hmmm...could be a pistachio as well...walnut? :)
(Still debating the ending...) |
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