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Sharese
Sharese
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Does it fit

In one moment
In one glimpse
In one light

You change

In one age
In one gleam
In one mind

You change

In one frame
In one smile
In one look

You change

In one door closing
In one, heart shutting
In one, tear falling

You change

In one memory
In one, pondering
In one cigarette

You change

In one hollow kiss
In one shallow caress
In one take

You change

In one feeling
In one thought
In one night

I change

Take off that ring that binds you
That listless sin of misery
Take off that cloak of shame and unforgiveness,
And put on the one of a murderer
that shows no mercy;
In one,
you seem to wear so true.

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nealmcdonald Comment by: nealmcdonald - 2007-12-11 17:23
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reads very dark and painful.. great ending
nativeamericanwr Comment by: nativeamericanwr - 2007-11-07 05:18
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Nice! I like the way you ended it. Seems like I've been there!
DansomeDan Comment by: DansomeDan - 2007-10-24 04:59
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Also rather col.
shadowboy Comment by: shadowboy - 2007-09-11 02:51
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I enjoyed this piece very much. The rhythm was good and brought you almost breathless to the very powerful ending. Great work.
metaphysicalg Comment by: metaphysicalg Online- 2007-06-22 14:50
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Thought provoking.
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