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Comment by: Lenny - 2008-08-01 21:11
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| I enjoyed your poem very much. great use of words and powerful imagery. |
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I love this poem..written well I must say...
"The power that emerges when you simply pray"...
Of course my favorite line....I am a huge fan of great one liners..you have caught my attention... Thank you..... |
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I like it. Your rhyming is good and I like the way you made only two stanzas rhyme. I also love your title. It's very creative.
Jess |
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| Great write, but I thought too much rhyme in the second and last paragraph. Also, the title puzzles me. I'm trying to think of the word I'd use instead of dismay. |
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| This is beautiful. Largely on merit of the second stanza, your wordplay is excellent. Thanks for the read! |
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