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Comment by: tcbswan - 2007-11-10 09:41
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gee thanks guys--appreciate the read and the comments. i hope to do some reading soon. email me if you have something special you want me to read. best,
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| I appreciate this 1) being a Trekkie 2) because it's beautiful. The last stanza grabs you with its poignancy and tenderness. Good stuff, Trace. |
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Still breaking down the space time continueum,
My thrusters are go!
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Comment by: LadyMoon Online- 2007-10-30 06:57
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How beautiful. The ending was certainly fitting, the voice, the tone, the rhythm fixed in mind.
I'm reading Ginsburg's 'Kaddish,' and for some reason, it reminds me of the style of writing he's created, if it were to be turned into the same structure.
Again,
Well done! :) |
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| I always enjoy anything you have done..as always beautiful :) |
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