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jsherbet
Jennifer Contreras
United States, New York, New York

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Planetary Pandemic

On grey days the trees
Stand twisted and gnarled
And silent as they
Yearn for the cover of snow
That has failed them.

Records broken and I
Retreat to the mountains ~
But they too, have failed me -
A retreat no more.

Wispy air and loss of cool -
I stand humbled as
Mother Earth and Father Time
(or, Abba Father)
Can only tell the realities of
The damage we have done.

At this moment a flake descends,
But sadly she and her friends
Only greet us in passing so
As not to overstay their welcome ~
Not that I blame her.

Some day we will look back
As we did on the tragedies of
Slavery, imperialism, and selfishness
And tell our children ~

Just what were we thinking?


Copyright 2007 - jms

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hx Comment by: hx - 2007-11-19 13:21
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Nicely written - very profound. It scanned a bit more like prose than poetry...not that there's anything wrong with that, of course. The stanza breaks added a bit of emphasis to each concrete thought. Not sure if that's intentional or a happy accident.

In any case - great writing. Keep it up.
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