 |
 |
 |
| |
This is Just to Say (to You)
Homage to William Carlos Williams
I am looking
at life
pearly
and bright
and I took
a bite of it~
I make
no apology
it was
amazing~
so sweet and
so warm
Copyright 2007 ~jms
Want to comment on this Poetry?
Sign up to Edit Red and you will be able to comment on Poetry and get access to: Upload your own stories and poems, get readers and their feedback, promote your work...
|
 |
|
[Back to top]
|
|
|
|
This is a very meaningful piece. It's short and sweet, just like life itself. There is never a need to apologize for taking a bite out of life. The sorrowful act is if you didnâ??t take a bite out of life. Keep biting at your hearts contempt, and never let anyone tell you any different.
Peace, Love, â??N Happiness
Ken Ortiz aka DJ !/2 P!NT |
|
|
| i really like this poem. me i like bite a little of life at a time when i feel most secure i go in all or nothing :) keep writing peace |
|
|
| Thanks, I choose to bite the sweet and spit out the bitter. This poem is actually a tribute to William Carlos Williams' poem, "This is Just to Say"....if you read that work you'll see the parallel. |
|
|
| This was an interesting little poem. Fortunately, you never bit into the bitter, cold fruit of reality. |
| 1 |
|
 |
|
 |
|
|
