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jEmMa
jemma cooper
United Kingdom, manchester

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One Day

Never said I couldn't do it
I'm going to show you I can
From my first breath in the morning
I'm working on a master plan

I've got no worries to get me down
I never realized before
I never did so well
And now I'm back ashore

chorus!!
Linked in my chain x2
The fixtures and fittings are nothing
Without you
linked in my chainx2

Never said I wouldn't do it
Because I know damn well i'm able
From the clouds to the ground
I promise I wont become unstable

Never said I shouldn't do it
I know you know me too well
From black and white to our vivid dreams
I'm always under your spell

So when I look for a window
I want to see you smile
From the first to the last breath
I'll wait for you child

chorus!!
Linked in my chain x2
The fixtures and fittings are nothing
Without you
linked in my chainx2



Copyright © 2007jemma cooper

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LadyEgyptia Comment by: LadyEgyptia - 2007-05-04 17:10
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Love the lyrics... hope to hear the music someday...
jEmMa Comment by: jEmMa - 2007-05-04 08:19
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hey BLACKBIRDSONG chain x2 - sorry 2 confuse - i ment 2 sing that line twice - lots of ppl have sed they wanna hear it wiv the music - am afraid i havnt got the music done yet - tho me and my cuz hav worked out a general flow 4 it - snds good!!
Blackbirdsong Comment by: Blackbirdsong - 2007-05-03 22:17
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I wish I could hear this with the music, because the words certainly are stirring. My only question is what's a "chainx2." I like the rhythm of the word even though I don't know what it is.
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