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jEmMa
jemma cooper
United Kingdom, manchester

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Acid Yantra

The moon shifts with imagry

Light tears through the night sea

Reflection patterns hovering

Clouds above me

Birds flying high floating free

Sand grains swimming in bubbles

Blue night living darkness yet to be

Planes aflight their dazzeling lights

I wonder if they can see me



Copyright © 2007jemma cooper

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processofbelief Comment by: processofbelief - 2007-07-04 18:25
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I can see some jim morrison in there, with the Doors-like insanity.
scarlet09 Comment by: scarlet09 - 2007-05-10 16:04
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thanks for the comment and I really like this poem.
jEmMa Comment by: jEmMa - 2007-05-08 09:32
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thank you - inspiration 4 the poem is JIM MORRISON
GrkGrl Comment by: GrkGrl - 2007-05-07 22:01
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jemma....this is most excellent!
"blue night living darkness yet to be"
(loved that)
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