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Angelica
Samantha Snedorf
South Africa, Gauteng, Johannesberg

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Summer dreams

As we lay,
Side by side on that rickety bridge
Our souls bonded.
We communicated
Through still drying tears
And ghosts of hugs.
She showed me beauty
Flowing ceaselessly.

So we dipped our hands.
Picking our leaves
And allowing them to course
Beneath our prostrate bodies.
An act, nearly poignant
Submersed in a vulnerable love.
Our hearts whispered
As we released debris caught between stones.
And watched the river wash them clean.

We walked away with our icy hands,
Brushing away the dirt from our fronts.
Everything seemed cleansed once more.
A tingling light pulsed within me
And the long grass kissed my ankles.

For Helene

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TrackerBt1 Comment by: TrackerBt1 - 2008-05-14 17:30
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Beautiful, the picture you paint is a tender and moving one. And with summer coming up I can't help but become wistful about the days ahead.
Dakota Comment by: Dakota - 2007-12-02 08:52
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OrigJosh gets to the nub of it.
It's a beautiful poem.
And the long grass kissed my ankles.
The ghosts of hugs... Poetic lines of loveliness...
You mention depression... My thoughts on that...
One of the problems with writing, painting, music, is that the most used tool in the box - is emotion. Emotion is more dangerous than uranium, than heroin, than any opiate we devour or court. It is the one substance that can render us useless - can make us think only of ourselves. There is the danger... I speak from the mire of someone who has ploughed that furrow to insane depths... How to get out? My best friend said to me; stop thinking of yourself. It isn't the first time it has been said to me either - but this time his words rang like a bell...x
OrigJosh Comment by: OrigJosh - 2007-08-06 21:31
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I can only hope to have a few friends like this...nothing has to be spoken for an entire conversation to transpire.
hulshizer Comment by: hulshizer - 2007-05-03 05:09
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And watched the river (was) them clean." wash? That was a lovely tribute.
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