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| You like adding "ness" to the end of your words, don't you? (purposelessness nothingness) Anywho, I thought your poem was very good. Detailed and written very beautifully. Should I call it amazingness? =] |
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| "Fruitlessly trying to fill the hole with nothingness..." This is my fave line! every line flowed right off the tongue so smooth and easy. This has a wonderful rhythm and the theme is consistant throughout. Nicely done. |
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Comment by: history - 2007-06-30 08:50
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| Wow, unrelenting. I like this a lot, especially the word "purposelessness"! What an excellent word! My favourite line was ' lazily accepting the bland monotony of mediocrity'. It flows really nicely. I look forward to reading more of your work! |
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| this has a love of Biblical words, have you read the Bible? |
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Pretty sad this is. One word i stumbled upon is "purposelessness" but it's probably because it was a mouthful for me to say.
Liked the line: Gorging on average
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