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Salo
J.M. Salo
United States, GA, Statesboro

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A Warrior's Eulogy

He has fallen in the East,
Nothing for the Valkyries to pick up
but bits of flesh.
Still he dies a warrior,
a soldier to the end,
Room awaits him in Valhalla.
He strode into battle proud,
his dusty boots
beating a path many have gone before.
He carried his rifle,
and kevlar shield,
trained to kill;
and kill he did.
Don't cry for him, no tears are needed,
rejoice his meeting with Allfather,
speak his name with warmth in your heart,
he fell on the field of battle
on a path many have gone before.
His brothers will carry on
his memory and his mission
He will await them in the Sacred Halls,
with mead on his breath
and a smile on his face.
He will await them in a place,
many have gone before.

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Requiem Comment by: Requiem - 2007-11-06 07:46
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Beautiful. Carrying the old world into the new and knowing that there is still a balance between the two. Masterfully done, thank you.
ravenshadowwinds Comment by: ravenshadowwinds - 2007-10-22 18:08
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I really liked this, tying the present with the past. We should never forget from where we came (I have a bit of Norseman in me). Warriors have been a fixture in history, this peice is timeless really.
mootiy Comment by: mootiy - 2007-05-31 10:19
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i really like this, very well written. Thanks for sharing
roswellprincess Comment by: roswellprincess - 2007-05-18 09:48
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Love the mythology of this piece. Very well written!
zepol Comment by: zepol - 2007-05-18 07:24
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This is a very smartly written and strong piece of work
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