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rabableo
Rabab Khan
Pakistan, Islamabad

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White

My opaline life reflects


All the colourful moments


On a dark canvas.


 


Remnants of cherry embraces


Encrusted on my carpet;


Flaming tangerine sighs floating through


The bedroom windows every night;


Fumbling emerald lips,


Dripping Eu-de-Nil melodies,


Embedded in the couch;


Cerise flushes linger


Where your soothing caresses flowed;


Your amaranthine glances


Still cling to my pillow,


Casting shades of indigo


On my tearless eyes.


 


You vanished,


Vestiges of your colours


Remain.


 


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Qamar Comment by: Qamar - 2008-07-09 23:37
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some words will definitely give me a run towards dictionary.
DickGentile Comment by: DickGentile - 2008-03-29 00:59
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poetguyraza Comment by: poetguyraza - 2008-01-23 18:02
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This is so short yet so descriptive a brief little poem yet it says so much a very beautiful piece indeed I love this poetry your sadness is even beautiful by the way why aren't you coming to school for the past couple of days??
Red Pulp Comment by: Red Pulp - 2007-11-04 18:08
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You use language sparingly yet quite descriptively.
Juanita Comment by: Juanita - 2007-10-15 12:54
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Wow, you're a great writer. This one is really good too. You're very descriptive.
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