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| Great work! This is deep and so true...:) |
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Comment by: GreenIce Online- 2007-07-05 01:03
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| "sanity breaks my illusion"..yet another one..words taken from my mouth...and im sure a thousand others...nicely written..truth coulsnt be any more perfect...for me anyway...thanks |
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Comment by: zepol - 2007-05-30 15:57
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| The first stanza is excellent. Its cadence is very good. Your second and third stanzas break the cadence, which was previously set but the content is very good. I like your content. I am a sucker for content. well done... |
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Comment by: - 2007-05-12 21:21
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"Sanity to me
Is udder confusion"
I liked that line, I was hooked right off the bat. One question...What's your illusion? |
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Comment by: yican - 2007-05-10 19:49
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I really like this. Short yet full of meanings. Your message comes through right away.
A suggestion:
Got a [glimpse] of myself
Thanks for the read! |
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