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quilterofwords
Bonnie Florea
United States, Oh, Blanchester

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Reckoning

Sea's of ancients
Tides of time
Drinking of the water,
so that youth may be mine
Longing for it... thirsting for it...
Tasting the wild sweetness
The outer air will no longer go uncloaked
Whose garments of the rough salt wave are soaked
Flinging my tresses on the stream,
my friend of the sea's has cygnet and grieved
Watching often for my returning beam
A hundred years, and a hundred years more
Mourning upon this reedy shore
Legion's of clouds stood forth in their darkening;
yet no rain followed the thunder's roar
All the while beneath ancient sea's shrank,
as fire not seen,
was born
Souls stricken,
their bodies fled
Free falling,
reeling with pierced and shriveled eyes
Water poising youth's promise,
As the living become the walking dead

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quilterofwords Comment by: quilterofwords - 2007-05-22 19:59
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I got good news on this poem today, it was accepted for publication in the Writers Post Journal.
Promking007 Comment by: Promking007 - 2007-05-06 18:15
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Good imagery. I dig the metaphor of the passing of time with the sea's eternal ebb and flow.
crystaltest Comment by: crystaltest - 2007-05-06 18:13
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The first 4 lines successfully set the tone of the piece for me. This was full of visual elements and I liked the changes in of sentence structure and length. Thanks for sharing.
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