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Bonnie Florea
United States, Oh, Blanchester

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Thy Merle

Do ye hear it?

Can ye hear?

 The call of thy merle is poignant in its leer.

He is calling me, he is near.

Thee merle in thy quagmire.

His pitch is higher and grows.

Do ye hear?

Tis mine time to go. He sneers.

Austere is thy merle. Bent on thy ear.

Thou are now closer, can ye hear?

Complacent and disposed, thy merle in thy marsh.

Dark as night, thy merle tis, flight at night, where the lic'hen lives.

Fruitless and with out soul, he collects thee souls of others, as he goes.

Trespass not upon thee.

I call to thy merle in thy tree.

Persistent in his ploy.

 To take thy soul from thee.

But I too, will be, thy protector, of thee.

For thy soul has already been claimed, by one greater then this merle.

Thy one whom is greater then all, that thee may know.

Here on this passage, we do flow.

This time of short existents that thee will be, as we decide who claims us, before we exceed.

Be gone thy merle in thee tree, whom comes from wickedness in thee Quagmire.

Who thinks to steal thy soul from me?

As I live in this passage like the lic'hen.

Alone and flowerless I may seem,

I am not as alone, as I might appear.

I have a keeper, I hold dear.


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quilterofwords Comment by: quilterofwords - 2007-10-01 10:22
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Thank you spacedlaw and carriedale for your encouraging and supportive comments.
carriedale Comment by: carriedale - 2007-10-01 09:46
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"For thy soul has already been claimed, by one greater then this merle.
Thy one whom is greater then all, that thee may know...
I am not as alone, as I might appear.
I have a keeper, I hold dear."

such a good message- we are not alone in our struggle for our souls...you did such a fine job. I love your style of writing and unique ways of expressing your messages.
spacedlaw Comment by: spacedlaw - 2007-06-16 12:29
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I once wrote a story that runs along similar lines...
I love the way you wrote it, its style.
quilterofwords Comment by: quilterofwords - 2007-05-16 06:19
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Funny thing about my poems of this type, I have to be in a medieval sort of mood to write them. lol
This poem started from a poetry group exercise. Sometimes when my muse is in limbo, I'll take and write down a list of words I like, and then make a poem around them; it helps me to get the muse stimulated.
Also, Shakespeare and Poe are on my list of old time favorite poets.
Arley Comment by: Arley - 2007-05-15 13:14
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Damn Good! Thought I was reading Shakespeare there for a minute!
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