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| so lovely...I wish I had read this when my husband and I married...I searched for a simple and short way to tell him I love him and had a hard time writing something myself (too emotional -made it hard to write)such a fine fine poem...*sigh* |
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| This poem was featured in the "Stellar Showcase Journal" in the June, July and August issue. |
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Comment by: - 2007-05-10 20:56
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| You pack a lot of feeling in a minimalist way. The feeling reminds me of "You've Got A Friend." |
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| This works. Simple language. Very few wasted words (if any ). The paired statements interspersed with the line length ones gives it structure. |
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| Simply put, but very much to the point. Nice piece. |
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