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MeganR26
Megan Risleye
United States, Washingtin, Seattle

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Deep and broken, deeply Broken
songs do well to die.
But the Host of holy ghosts
live on in resurrection's Sigh.

No Blood could be unfaithful
if spilt at Redeemer's hand,
and it wasn't He nor was it we
that knew death in the Plans:

The fire in a Whisper '
crack! and a Mighty Wind;
I wonder how we Know now
the Way through aging sin.

Our clay is searing Desire;
better bells of Freedom ring
and none above than Light and Love:
we're stirred by Deeper Things.

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3rdtimothy Comment by: 3rdtimothy - 2007-05-31 21:44
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Forgiving ourselves of sin is more difficult than receiving the gift of grace bestowed upon us by Jesus.
xemoxangelx Comment by: xemoxangelx - 2007-05-08 10:55
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this poem uses rhyme well which makes the poem flow nicely and i like the way you have dealt with the emotions in this poem
verballyenhanced Comment by: verballyenhanced - 2007-05-08 10:15
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The two last lines of the third block I'm fascinated by. I like the abstract use of emotions that engage the senses.
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